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Post by chi <3 on Sept 11, 2007 1:28:53 GMT -5
name: chihiro age: 16 1/2 likes: dancing and kicking people in the balls XD *no i dont always enjoy that, ill have to burn my foot* so its dancing and designing hates: stupid hw and tests and credit stealers she is: an angel/devil waiting to decide which side she will take on as her full self. she can mutate to an angel: when she is happy and when she is mad she turns into a devil. she still doesn't know how to control it cuhs she is still a noob abilities: can shift from devil to angel. deciding which side she takes, she has certain abilities. she can't control when she turns into them, she can only let her emotions cause the transformation. when she is evil and angry she turns into the devil. she gets the ability to control wrath, able to torment a person with all the treacherous deeds they did in the past, allowing the victim to experience all the pain they inflicted. if she turns into an angel from being really pure and holy and such, she gets the ability to calm all the nerves and emotions in the room she is in and she has to ability to sing people into an eternal sleep and the victim can only awaken by their soul mate's kiss. lol cheesy but IDK. thats how i roll uhmm.. what else occupation: she works as a photographer, traveling the world and experiencing new sights and culture. weapon: a carved bow and arrow out of pure white gold which contain carvings of every sin and every good deed she ever done on it in korean. the arrows contain no feathers, but just a very sharp point at the front where instanteously can turn people's blood into jelloey texture. like snake venom does to humans. (can i do that? if i can't ill stick to my carved bow and arrow, without the poison XD) costume: she wears a white silk blouse shaped like a polo but sleeveless somewhat with the long flowy sleeves cut right in the middle so the fabric drapes down her shoulders and over that top, she wears a black-grayish halter dress with a maroon and white tie over her dress. the dress is cut above the knee and has a folded, ripple effect on the bottom and a thin ribbon bow behind the back. her shoes are black and have satin laces to wrap around the ankle but when she turns into an angel, she wears a white silk dress that reflects off the sunlight which causes her appearance to be somewhat glowing when she turns into a devil she is wearing a red tank top with a black miniskirt that accentuates the darkness surrounding her appearance: midnight blue hair * black in the dark and a bit midnight blue in the sun*, piercing eyes which change color according to her mood, tan, and slenderish height: 5'4 1/2 personality: 2 faced. moody. can be either really nice at one point , then totallie destructive in another. story: she was wandering into Sceleris forest, just heartbroken from the tradegies in her life. She accidently stumbled across a strange staircase spiraling into the ground and a grand staircase spiraling upward into the sky. they both seem infinite. Curious as always, she decided to visit the bottom one first. as she spiraled down, iono for how many days, she realized she didn't feel human anymore. as she went deeper into the ground, she started feeling anger build up in her chest. As she walked further down, she felt her skin explode under her and ripped off. She wanted to turn back, but her feet were being controlled. She was forced downward and for a few days, she entire body was raw. She felt a stingy sensation wrath in her body. after a few days later of utter torment, she finally realized she was at the end of the staircase. there was a murky pool with a quiet waterfall off to the side. The place was deserted except for a skeleton rotting in the pool. She peered over the side to see her reflection, expecting to see a raw human. Instead she saw a demon. a devil staring back at her. her hair was a dark red, her lips were unnaturally crimson, her eyes bloodshot, her skin pale as stone, and she felt angry all the time. she aimlessly wandered around the underworld for some time until she realized she needed to get out of there. she rushed up the stairs that took her about a month to reach the end, in a second. When she landed on the earth, the stairs to the underworld disappeared. She decided to try out the stairs above. She trudged upward. as she climbed each step, she started feeling her devil side slowly deterialize. *sp check there* she felt so light and carefree and her body felt regenerated and she felt like she was being born again. when she reach the top, she landed with a thud onto a soft cloud. the upperworld was like the underworld, only lighter, and had a comforting appearance to it. She peered in the cascading waterfall lakes to gaze upon her new reflection. She saw that she was her normal self. She was overjoyed as she floated downward to Earth. The stairway vanished immediately. She had to stay at a Moonlight City foster's home because she had no near relatives. She soon realized that trip to the worlds caused her to have a side effect. she would mutate into a angel if she was really happy and a devil when she was really mad. the foster's home kicked her out as soon as she reached 16, so she took up a job as a photographer for a national magazine. until then, she's been trying to harness her powers so she could control them.
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Post by kasai on Sept 11, 2007 17:43:07 GMT -5
Oh wow, she's done with her character before i was. *crys* MUST FINISH FASTER!!!!!!!
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Post by Shiki on Sept 11, 2007 18:26:04 GMT -5
Remember this isn't the real world. Either add in something about moving here or change your history to fit this world's history. You seem kinda godly what with the super torture and the insta-sleep moves. Mebbe try a different weapon? Bonnie also uses a bow and she's already got her legendary weapon. (Is it just me or do the legendary weapons seem to match the weapons we currently use? Suspicious.) Also add more of a condition to her transformation. What if she gets slightly annoyed... Does that make her into a half devil? You could add some more detail to the trans like what she normally is how long does she stay morphed etc. Also remember good grammar means good something or another.
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Post by Xyla on Sept 11, 2007 19:14:35 GMT -5
Hohoho. Shiki should be a Intro Reviewer..
Yeah um. XD Very dramatic! And detailed clothes designs that no doubt would look very cool! ;O (and are shockingly not gay either.)
I'm not sure we have photographs. XDDDD This is screwed-up-fantasy-land, so it's not the 1990's either... and um... that's about it.
Thank you for hopping onto the insane FRP bandwagon of d00meh. >;']
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Post by Kata on Sept 11, 2007 19:19:33 GMT -5
Hohoho. Shiki should be a Intro Reviewer.. Yeah um. XD Very dramatic! And detailed clothes designs that no doubt would look very cool! ;O (and are shockingly not gay either.) I'm not sure we have photographs. XDDDD This is screwed-up-fantasy-land, so it's not the 1990's either... and um... that's about it. Thank you for hopping onto the insane FRP bandwagon of d00meh. >;'] I agree about the clothes thingy. XD Angelic/demonic is awesome. :3
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Post by Sora on Sept 11, 2007 19:53:56 GMT -5
Remember this isn't the real world. Either add in something about moving here or change your history to fit this world's history. You seem kinda godly what with the super torture and the insta-sleep moves. Mebbe try a different weapon? Bonnie also uses a bow and she's already got her legendary weapon. (Is it just me or do the legendary weapons seem to match the weapons we currently use? Suspicious.) Also add more of a condition to her transformation. What if she gets slightly annoyed... Does that make her into a half devil? You could add some more detail to the trans like what she normally is how long does she stay morphed etc. Also remember good grammar means good something or another. Alex. T_T Be kind. Rewind. *gets shot* okay no. Just. Be nice. You're not perfect either. I can karma youuuuuuuuuu...
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Post by Sora on Sept 11, 2007 19:56:53 GMT -5
and also. yes. the legendary weapons fit our current weapons because they're meant for us. Obvious enough, right? And she can have a bow and arrow, it doesn't matter! As for being god-mode, well...there's no one else who's godmode here, so. you know. iz ok. we have our first creative character that can skulk about in the pub fitting in. o
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Post by Shiki on Sept 11, 2007 20:03:37 GMT -5
Remember this isn't the real world. Either add in something about moving here or change your history to fit this world's history. You seem kinda godly what with the super torture and the insta-sleep moves. Mebbe try a different weapon? Bonnie also uses a bow and she's already got her legendary weapon. (Is it just me or do the legendary weapons seem to match the weapons we currently use? Suspicious.) Also add more of a condition to her transformation. What if she gets slightly annoyed... Does that make her into a half devil? You could add some more detail to the trans like what she normally is how long does she stay morphed etc. Also remember good grammar means good something or another. Alex. T_T Be kind. Rewind. *gets shot* okay no. Just. Be nice. You're not perfect either. I can karma youuuuuuuuuu... I'm not nice (among other things) thus making me imperfect. When I critique things I do it in a manner-of-fact sort of way. Like how fat people complain about food even though they're too lazy to cook for themselves except without the attitude and the fatness.. Ok it's nothing alike, but I think you get my point? Did I have one? ARGH DOING HW AND VISITING THIS BOARD IS NOT A GOOD IDEA! Also Jenn agreed with what I said! I was trying to be nice though... T_T Oh last thing I meant she should change weapons cuz Bonnie's already got he legendary bow, and having two legendary bows is kinda err?
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Post by Kata on Sept 11, 2007 20:08:10 GMT -5
Constructive criticism?
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Post by Sora on Sept 11, 2007 20:13:07 GMT -5
what do the legendary weapons have to do with anything? Just because we've already got a legendary bow doesn't mean she can't get one. She probably won't get a legendary weapon anyway, because I already mapped it out as so. And her weapon is super special awesome enough.
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Post by Kata on Sept 11, 2007 20:16:32 GMT -5
Yeah. D: A white gold bow but it's hollow so it's not heavy. XD I didn't get that hollow part. D: Failure. X3
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Post by Shiki on Sept 11, 2007 21:22:23 GMT -5
Fine fine.... I have no points just ignore me and my non-RP delusions....
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Post by shmexyhair on Sept 11, 2007 21:25:23 GMT -5
Errr.... You'd kill yourself before you kill others wit that bow and arrow.... I'm pretty sure of it xD
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Post by chi <3 on Sept 11, 2007 21:43:08 GMT -5
haha. thats weird. o.o and i chose that bow cuhs ada told me it was the only thing left D: but not blaming u ada XD heheeh...
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Post by shmexyhair on Sept 11, 2007 21:43:42 GMT -5
Yea.... It's okay... you have the weirdest bow and arrows xD
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